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Preliminary exercise feedback and learner response

 learner response WWW: You have some planning posted to your blog which clearly shows you have worked on the preliminary exercise but no video on your blog. Having looked at your video on the Media Shared drive you’ve got a really decent preliminary exercise with good editing and multiple locations. Now we need to develop that and improve a few key areas for the two real video adverts.   EBI: There are a few things we can reflect on here. I like the switch to the second music track but the first one I’m not sure on. It’s a brilliant piece of music but I wonder if it’s a bit downbeat for an advert? You also need to have the final section on screen for longer – the product shot, the text on screen etc. Perhaps consider voiceover too? The final thing for the real advert is mise-en-scene – particularly costume. I would avoid school uniform completely unless the narrative is specifically set in a classroom.   In terms of your planning, you definitely need more detail – particularly in terms
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Video adverts pre-production

  Video adverts pre-production 1) Create TWO scripts for your two different adverts First add Its going to be me and my friend in the advert in the gym working out in a formal gym clothes.  At the start:   Me and my will be working out together in the gym and i feel vary tired and not feeling like doing the workout.   ME: I can't do this any more. My friend: come on man you can do this  Me: I can't my friend hands me over a drink which will be the product that I will be making the add on. My friend : hear take this it will boost your strength. Me: ok fine  My friend: did it work? Me: yeahhhhh!! at the end the voice over will say the flowing: "explode you fitness" Second add: It will start of in a local park me and my friend doing exercise.doing laps around the hills. In the morning. Me: we have to do around 5 to 6 laps around the parks ok. telling my friend my friend: ok fine we will do itl. In the 2-3 lpas the editing will be fast paced. And when we get around lap 4
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Year 11 Paper 1 assessment: Learner Response

  Year 11 Paper 1 assessment: Learner Response Total marks: 13                 Grade: 3 1) Type up your feedback in full (you do not need to write mark/grade if you do not wish to). WWW - Good knowledge of terminology show so now we need to develop our exam technique in the higher- mark questions. EBI - Revise narrative theory and Galaxy CSP                                                                                                        - revise/ practice social and cultural contexts questions. we will look of  this in class.                                    - More detailed references to the CSP 2) Look at the  mark scheme for this assessment . For Question 2 (12 mark unseen) use the indicative content in the mark scheme to identify three points that you could have referred to in your answer. Dress code has connotations of strength since the trainers are engaged in the activity and the clothes are functional and appropriate for task so they connote success and durability. The m
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Preliminary exercise task

  Preliminary exercise tasks:  Health drink advert 1) Write a 100 word statement of intent explaining what you are going to make for your preliminary exercise.(102 words) in my 40-50 second advert will be a boy who is struggling and can't do the workout due to tiredness from school who is helped by a protein milkshake. At the start of the advert i will show how the boy struggles in gym and can't be asked to do the workout.my character will be in normal gym clothes.in the middle of the advert the character will discover the product with the over the shoulder shot. The character will be drinking it with a close up to the face. The advert will end with the character enjoying the workout and not struggling.   2) Write a  script  for your preliminary exercise on your blog. This needs to include stage directions AND dialogue. To see how a TV drama script is presented, and to look at professional examples, check out the  BBC Writers' Room  and click on Script Library. These will n
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Summer Project 2024

  Summer project tasks: 1) Research: health drink TV adverts:  Innocent Drinks 1) What is the  unique selling point  of the product ?  Utilising natural, wholesome ingredients is Innocent Drinks' unique selling proposition (USP). The company emphasises that all of the ingredients in their products are fresh, pure fruits; they don't contain any artificial additives, preservatives, or extra sugars. With its focus on health, simplicity, and natural ingredients, Innocent Drinks distinguishes apart in a crowded industry of beverages that often contain artificial additives. 2) What  audience  do you think this is aimed at? Add as much detail as possible (e.g. demographics, psychographics) and explain  why . Age: The target market consists of young adults and middle-aged consumers (18–45 years old). Gender: Gender-neutral, appealing to both men and women equally.  High-end, health-conscious products are more likely to be affordable for middle-class to upper-class consumers. Higher edu
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End of Year 1 exam Learner Response

  End of Year 1 exam Learner Response TOTAL: 15                          GRADE: 4 1) Type up any feedback from your teacher in full (you do not need to write mark/grade if you do not wish to). WWW - You've clearly revised both TV texts and made some really good points here. Well Done! Now we want to add a little consistency across the whole pape. EBI - Practice the skills for the first section with the clip and note taking .            - Revise narrative theory            - Add depth , detail and reference to the clip in the 12- marker question (Q1.3) 2) Look at the mark scheme document linked above. Question 1.1 asks about mise-en-scene. What do we use to remember mise-en-scene? Give one example answer from the mark scheme too. • Will’s costume – makes him look like he is from our world • Setting – empty city. • Actor movement – the chase scene. • Props – the drinks and bread. 3) Question 1.2 asks about narrative features in the extract. Look at the mark scheme to pick out three p
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Radio: Final index

  Radio: Final index 1)  Radio: Launch of BBC Radio 1 CSP 2)  Radio: KISS FM Breakfast show CSP
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