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Preliminary exercise feedback and learner response

 learner response WWW: You have some planning posted to your blog which clearly shows you have worked on the preliminary exercise but no video on your blog. Having looked at your video on the Media Shared drive you’ve got a really decent preliminary exercise with good editing and multiple locations. Now we need to develop that and improve a few key areas for the two real video adverts.   EBI: There are a few things we can reflect on here. I like the switch to the second music track but the first one I’m not sure on. It’s a brilliant piece of music but I wonder if it’s a bit downbeat for an advert? You also need to have the final section on screen for longer – the product shot, the text on screen etc. Perhaps consider voiceover too? The final thing for the real advert is mise-en-scene – particularly costume. I would avoid school uniform completely unless the narrative is specifically set in a classroom.   In terms of your planning, you definitely need more detail – particu...

Video adverts pre-production

  Video adverts pre-production 1) Create TWO scripts for your two different adverts First add Its going to be me and my friend in the advert in the gym working out in a formal gym clothes.  At the start:   Me and my will be working out together in the gym and i feel vary tired and not feeling like doing the workout.   ME: I can't do this any more. My friend: come on man you can do this  Me: I can't my friend hands me over a drink which will be the product that I will be making the add on. My friend : hear take this it will boost your strength. Me: ok fine  My friend: did it work? Me: yeahhhhh!! at the end the voice over will say the flowing: "explode you fitness" Second add: It will start of in a local park me and my friend doing exercise.doing laps around the hills. In the morning. Me: we have to do around 5 to 6 laps around the parks ok. telling my friend my friend: ok fine we will do itl. In the 2-3 lpas the editing will be fast paced. And when we g...

Year 11 Paper 1 assessment: Learner Response

  Year 11 Paper 1 assessment: Learner Response Total marks: 13                 Grade: 3 1) Type up your feedback in full (you do not need to write mark/grade if you do not wish to). WWW - Good knowledge of terminology show so now we need to develop our exam technique in the higher- mark questions. EBI - Revise narrative theory and Galaxy CSP                                                                                                        - revise/ practice social and cultural contexts questions. we will look of  this in class.                                    - More detailed referen...